Sunday, February 15, 2009

Bubble Gum Tongue

by Adrian Ludens

Me and Barry were bunkmates at McCrossen’s Ranch For Troubled Teens. He always bragged about all the tail he’s chased. I had no interest until Barry described the new girl, Candy.

“Cherry lips,” he said.

“Honey hair.”

“Bubble gum tongue.”

I wanted to meet her.

So one night I asked Barry to arrange for Candy to meet me behind the horse barn after ‘lights out’.

We met, but things turned real bad, real fast. I leaned in for a taste and next thing I know, Candy’s screaming and gargling blood.

Bubble gum tongue? Barry’s such a liar. Tasted like copper and raw meat to me.

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Adrian Ludens is a radio announcer in the Black Hills of South Dakota. He majored in journalism but prefers to stretch the imagination via speculative fiction. Visit him at www.myspace.com/adrianludens.

12 comments:

Jodi Lee said...

LOL! Perfect!

BT said...

very cool

Rebecca Nazar said...

Well done.

Inkpot said...

Mmm... copper and raw meat. Yum. :)

Leatherdykeuk said...

Splendid denouement!

Catherine J Gardner said...

Gross. LOL!

L R Bonehill said...

Short and sweet, well...coppery.

Natalie L. Sin said...

*LOL* That was delightful : )

jonathan pinnock said...

Ewww!

Neat :)

Jamie Eyberg said...

Funny.

Rich said...

Awesome story. This is more my kind of thing. Short, nasty and leaves a bad taste in the mouth (literally). One of the better ones so far.

Rich

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