Me and Barry were bunkmates at McCrossen’s Ranch For Troubled Teens. He always bragged about all the tail he’s chased. I had no interest until Barry described the new girl, Candy.
“Cherry lips,” he said.
“Honey hair.”
“Bubble gum tongue.”
I wanted to meet her.
So one night I asked Barry to arrange for Candy to meet me behind the horse barn after ‘lights out’.
We met, but things turned real bad, real fast. I leaned in for a taste and next thing I know, Candy’s screaming and gargling blood.
Bubble gum tongue? Barry’s such a liar. Tasted like copper and raw meat to me.
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Adrian Ludens is a radio announcer in the Black Hills of South Dakota. He majored in journalism but prefers to stretch the imagination via speculative fiction. Visit him at www.myspace.com/adrianludens.
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11 comments:
LOL! Perfect!
very cool
Well done.
Mmm... copper and raw meat. Yum. :)
Splendid denouement!
Gross. LOL!
Short and sweet, well...coppery.
*LOL* That was delightful : )
Ewww!
Neat :)
Awesome story. This is more my kind of thing. Short, nasty and leaves a bad taste in the mouth (literally). One of the better ones so far.
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