tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post4920432329114942089..comments2023-10-19T07:14:10.551-05:00Comments on Fifty-Two Stitches: Flash Cards for the BlindStrange Publicationshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06573868275207711252noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-58064160840665516462010-09-13T05:46:54.742-05:002010-09-13T05:46:54.742-05:00emmqnfziqkemntlsgfgt, justin bieber baby lyrics, d...emmqnfziqkemntlsgfgt, <a href="http://justinbieberbabylyricsblog.com/justin-bieber-baby-lyrics/" rel="nofollow">justin bieber baby lyrics</a>, drvcllb.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-62616461351245864432010-09-13T05:16:36.117-05:002010-09-13T05:16:36.117-05:00Yeah...I don't think the parentheses are neces...Yeah...I don't think the parentheses are necessary. We're in the narrator's POV so anything unspoken are his thoughts/observations by default. It was a distracting flourish for me.Michael Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362324064346137974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-43427721299152889372010-09-12T18:08:23.713-05:002010-09-12T18:08:23.713-05:00The parentheses are what the narrator is thinking....The parentheses are what the narrator is thinking. The words without parentheses or quotes are being spoken by the narrator. The words in quotes are what the victim/"you"/the person being spoken to is saying in return.<br /><br />...and, I loved the story. As Michael said, very well written. Cool idea!Brad Chacosnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-46787053453561529452010-09-12T11:53:53.109-05:002010-09-12T11:53:53.109-05:00I didn't get this, but it seemed well written ...I didn't get this, but it seemed well written so I read it again. And I still don't get it. Nor am I sure why some lines are in parentheses. Anyone care to explain what I'm missing?Michael Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362324064346137974noreply@blogger.com