tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post2761088179958940821..comments2023-10-19T07:14:10.551-05:00Comments on Fifty-Two Stitches: The Man in the MirrorStrange Publicationshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06573868275207711252noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-64803137191614126532010-06-07T01:42:54.854-05:002010-06-07T01:42:54.854-05:00Oh, I like that. Beautiful.Oh, I like that. Beautiful.Cate Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05634397106201021055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-27239758656893052282010-06-05T09:09:34.196-05:002010-06-05T09:09:34.196-05:00About halfway through the piece, I realized that t...About halfway through the piece, I realized that the character was the reflection and I thought "OH, how cool!!!" Great idea. I loved the descriptions you used for waking from sleep... I could feel it. <br /><br />Nice Story!!Kara McElhinnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10013577325689856288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-18567727563140261922010-06-03T09:15:00.615-05:002010-06-03T09:15:00.615-05:00Nice work! Drew me in...
And I agree with Doug ab...Nice work! Drew me in...<br /><br />And I agree with Doug about the last line. It releases some of the fine tension you've created. But that's beside the point...well done.Fran Frielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11779189702107014516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-33804499595305373222010-06-01T11:14:48.953-05:002010-06-01T11:14:48.953-05:00Thanks guys. The last line was a hard call to make...Thanks guys. The last line was a hard call to make, but it did not seem quite finished without it, or without re-working the previous line to be a bit more straightforward.montsamuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07591244606673064670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-55134706018613891082010-06-01T03:13:40.329-05:002010-06-01T03:13:40.329-05:00Nicely done!Nicely done!jonathan pinnockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17865393294059636207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4344150782959384958.post-81134538634128564572010-05-31T22:10:22.311-05:002010-05-31T22:10:22.311-05:00Great punch at the end. Almost wish you hadn't...Great punch at the end. Almost wish you hadn't included that last line, though.Doug Muranohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11911501071644588107noreply@blogger.com